Nice job. The tension in her apartment is well executed. Sound is on point as well which is critical in my opinion.

At 2:16, it seems weird that the frame guide/battery indicator/rec are showing on her TV. At 8:34, there's a typo in the subtitles. "children" - not "childeren."

Otherwise, I liked it - the pacing seemed about right to keep me interested. Good job!

Thanks guys. @producer, well, I dont know. I used pp1, sgamut and cine2. I think cine 2 was a mistake, I had to take cine4. I had really very low space in grading the footage. Really couldn't do a lot with the colors and stuff.

I thought it looked good, sounded good. Keep rockin!

I enjoyed the film. Very well done. Some images seem to repeat like her paranoia. Maybe if it creeped up on us a little more instead of being so strong from beginning to end. I think the cuts can be tighter at some points but don't ruin it by jamming the shots together. Some scenes need to breath. The ending however can be tighter.

Well, why don't you upload a half minute raw fragments taken with either cine2 and cine4?

Don't use Sgamut with anything but Slog, it's very hard to grade. Rather take "Cinema" or "Pro" with the Cine settings. Plus, Cine 4 is much better IMHO since it not only has a better distribution between shadow and light, but is delivering superwhites, which are cut by Cine 2.

Yeah, I didn't give a f@@k about the color grade, but these guys know a lot more than me. I found the video tape camera frames around the opening sequence were distracting. You don't need them because it actually looks like sd video and the frame looks a bit cheesy. That was one. Two, when she meets the imaginary fan and he offers the change, I thinks that's too much and takes away from the final reveal. Everything until the hand/change shot dialogue is fine, but otherwise it takes away from the imagination of the viewer. Without it, we still know where this going, so while a good idea, it's just a bit too much. Otherwise, it's perfect except for maybe the grading concerns, which to be honest, didn't take me out of the story. Quite a fantastic accomplishment really. It's a bit of an uncomfortable subject but I really enjoyed it. If you go back and edit this, I would do so with an eye to defend the reveal at the end, because in so many ways we already see it coming, and it somewhat reduces the impact when we see it. Still, great work.

@producer

Wow! You turned it into a sci-fi teen flick.

Huge lighting issues with sodium lights on the street. Looks like camera white balance has not been done. Also different colour temperature lighting sources on interior scene. Here's a rough grade.

@caveport "Wow! You turned it into a sci-fi teen flick."

Well, if depends on you, all the movies should look the same. I'm sure you've seen many movies with a conception like in my processing. But if you try to re-grade them as you wish, they all will look like your edit above. Not saying that your grading is bad, just different kind of opinions - the most banal and traditional look. The greenish skin is what I wanted to get, with the more normal look of the background, just to get the actress face more "obvious" (sorry, couldn't find the best word in English)... IMHO, expecially the scene which the thumbnail of my video shows is much more cinematic, at least the same scene is the best made from the whole video.

At the end I just left it as it was. Because I have the feeling that all the color information was gone. I learned something here. Next time I will use slog2 (just over exposure for 1 to 2 stops). Anyway, thanks for the help.