Well, this is a good start. If you want to evolve, there are some suggestions from me: next time, use some more lighting to get things like those shelves in the third shot lit up properly. Overall it seems quite dark- more film-like than that what typically a company would want for good representation and image. Lets see what you can do in CC. :)

also, are you planning on tracking that text on the wall "IT CONSULTING"? If not, i would advise you to. Next time you might want to put some markers up on the wall, as they will be covered by your text, but give you a much easier time tracking :)

keep up the good work!

Thanks for the feedback. I started shooting on a Canon FD 20mm 2.8 ssc, switched to Sigma EF 20mm 1.8, in mid production because I wasn't happy with the softness of the image. I swear those FD lenses are spooky how hey look great in tests then turn on me.... I was going for a more elegant Fincher type filmic look. It was a rushed production and all shot in 8 hours. the lighting turned out very well in some shots and not so great in others. Gotta love a crew that is afraid of shadows and hotspots. Amazing that the best shots have shadows and hotspots :) but that is another story...I think the server rack shot is my favorite.

The lettering is not finalized and suppose to be floating type balloon text in the scene but we realized in post we did not have enough tracking points. (live and learn). My idea for fix is put the lettering in the scene like on the table and etc. Make it more obtrusive rather than hanging on a wall or etc.