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Need some critical feedback please
  • azza_actazza_act

    Heh guys, just looking for some feed back with this job i just finished for a actor. I did the VFX, camera work and editing. Shot with the GH2 on Flowmotion hack V2.2.

    Love to get feedback on the camera work, color grading and lighting etc. Cheers

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  • Vitaliy_KiselevVitaliy_Kiselev

    It is all good, but post in proper category.

  • azza_actazza_act

    @Vitaliy_Kiselev Sorry, thanks.

  • RRRRRRRR

    @azza_act looks good. Clean stuff. Send me a pm with your mail adress, I want to send some samples with the 17.5mm. I didn´t have time last week but if you´re still interested I did a few shots during the weekend. Nothing fancy. :)

  • peaceonearthpeaceonearth

    @azza_act camera work and grading looks very good. What I don't like too much is the army scene. If you don't get it more realistic I would turn down the gun fire.

    I have no experience with an actor's showreel. If this length is standard then it has to be like that. If you are free in handling I would propose to shorten it (first of all the army scene) I see that the screenplay tries to embed his acting into a story line, but it is obvious that the single clips are not a part of a real story/movie. Mr. Schuttermaier imho seems to be a little overacting but this should be under direcor's responsability. Again: great camera work and grading.

  • RRRRRRRR

    @peaceonearth I think you have some very good points there. This should be really valuable for Mr Schuttermaier to see how he comes across, on the screen.. (ideally)

  • azza_actazza_act

    @RRRR @peaceonearth thanks guys for the input. Cheers

  • jpbturbojpbturbo

    The muzzle flashes in the opening scene are too solid.

    Their shooting technique is terrible as well but that's not your fault.

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